Strip 6: Request Denied

The dialogue bubbles in this strip were a particular source of frustration for us, having no experience with allocating page space for longer lines. Believe it or not, this is better than it used to be, as the first draft of the strip required a magnifying glass to read the first two panels. Now I include a rough placement for dialogue bubbles in my storyboards, and Evan does the same for the penciled strips. Lesson learned.

- J.S. Conner

May 10th 2013